Monday, May 21, 2012

55 Word Stories

So this is my post after what seems like forever. It isn't that I don't want to, but procrastination has always been my biggest enemy. Anyways I did manage to write five (really) short stories for this wonderful blog managed by @vivekisms. It was a Flipkart contest that introduced the blog to me and I was amazed to see the response the blog evoked. There were people submitting stories every day waiting for the theme of the day to be tweeted. Without further delay, let me post below the five stories I sent in.

Space
In the prime of youth, sitting in solitary confines, she had whispered to me - "Come closer" - and the space between us had vanished in a moment. Now, trudging along the path of adulthood, heavyhearted and weary, I seek refuge in her, and she says - "I need my personal space".

Relationships
As I stood before him disappointed at the turn of events, he was his usual silent self. Despite my attempts at making this relationship work, I was uncertain about its future and wondered if I ever held any significance to him. I went home, logged on to Facebook and changed my religion to atheism.

Decadence
Seated on a dingy hotel sofa, phone in one hand and a glass of wine in the other, he watched their lissome naked bodies entwine temptingly. “Love you. Talk to you later”, he said as he disconnected the call, emptied the wine glass over the two exquisite beauties on offer and threw himself between them.

Words
As the cameras flashed to capture glimpses of the fastest man on earth, he could hear his mother’s words when he had collapsed in her arms, crying over taunts that he was too weak to walk. Far away, sitting before a television set, an old woman mumbled – I told you, you were born to run.

Magic
He took his father’s frail hands and walked him to the lone bench in the hospital compound.
The old man’s eyes gleamed as he looked up at the clear night sky.
 “What are they?”
“Stars.”
“How do they shine?”
“Long ago, you told me it’s magic”, he replied.
“Magic indeed”, his father nodded approvingly.

Based on the response I received on Twitter, I can proudly say 'magic' and 'decadence' stories were much appreciated.

5 comments:

Ravi said...

Awesome, each one is deep and yet short.

Sanoop said...

Thanks Ravi. I'm surprised that someone actually read my blog. :)

Ruchi Jain said...

superb sanoop,, the idea is unique and the relationship and facebook one is nice..

Sanoop said...

Thanks Ruchi. Just wondering how you came along my blog. :)

Kiran Chalasani said...

Awesome man! I just loved them so much !!!!! :)

 
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